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The 3-Step Writing Framework That Helped Us Build +$10M Newsletters

Use Sam's secret growth sauce: generate more traffic with HubSpot's Free Landing Page Builder 🔥 https://clickhubspot.com/9u9 Episode 552: Shaan Puri (https://twitter.com/ShaanVP) and Sam Parr (https://twitter.com/theSamParr) teach the 3-step writing framework that helped them build +$10M newsletters. Get Shaan’s writing course - https://maven.com/generalist/writing Get Sam’s writing course - https://copythat.com/ — Show Notes: (0:00) Intro (2:50) Why not how - Persuasion at scale (7:00) To write clearly, you must think clearly (8:00) Begin with the end in mind (11:30) Headlines not outlines (13:30) Warmup with copywork (16:30) Draft fast, incubate slow (17:30) Great writing is great editing (20:00) Build your swipe file (22:00) Don't bury the lead (24:30) Create a curiosity gap (26:00) Write like you talk (29:00) The voice memo test (31:30) Lower the reading level (33:00) How to tell a great story (35:30) Intention meets obstacle (39:00) High emotional stakes in a low stakes situation (40:00) Short sentences (42:00) Great writing has rhythm (45:00) Our favorite resources — Links: • Hemingway Editor - https://hemingwayapp.com/ • Neville Medhora on Louis C.K. - https://copywritingcourse.com/louis-ck-direct-video-sales/ • The Hustle Writes about Hint Founder - http://tinyurl.com/2d537k7f • Hey.com - https://www.hey.com/ • On Writing - http://tinyurl.com/5f334swt • Theo Von - https://www.theovon.com/ — Check Out Shaan's Stuff: • Shaan's weekly email - https://www.shaanpuri.com • Visit https://www.somewhere.com/mfm to hire global talent (like Shaan does) and get $500 off for being an MFM listener. Hire developers, assistants, marketing pros, sales teams and more for 80% less than their US equivalents. — Check Out Sam's Stuff: • Hampton - https://www.joinhampton.com/ • Ideation Bootcamp - https://www.ideationbootcamp.co/ • Copy That - https://copythat.com • Hampton Wealth Survey - https://joinhampton.com/wealth 💰 Pitch your startup for a shot at a $1M investment with Sam Parr as the MC https://clickhubspot.com/pitch My First Million is a HubSpot Original Podcast // Brought to you by The HubSpot Podcast Network // Production by Arie Desormeaux // Editing by Ezra Bakker Trupiano

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WHAT IT’S REALLY ABOUT

Shaan Puri and Sam Parr's Practical Framework for Writing That Persuades

  1. The hosts argue writing is persuasion at scale and a tool for clear thinking, since bad writing exposes bad thinking and writing itself generates new ideas.
  2. Their process starts with the end in mind (the desired emotion, action and single memorable line), then moves through copywork warmups, a fast ugly draft, an incubation break, and heavy editing.
  3. On the page, they advise leading with the strongest sentence, creating a curiosity gap, writing like you talk, using short sentences, and keeping reading level around fifth to eighth grade.
  4. For storytelling, Shaan explains that stories need an intention and an obstacle with real emotional stakes, ideally in low-stakes situations, and both hosts illustrate with examples like the Hint Water article, Louis C.K. and Curb Your Enthusiasm.
  5. They close with resources such as Stephen King's On Writing, comedians and true crime podcasts, plus the advice to write about what you genuinely nerd out on so your content is simply you pushed out.

IDEAS WORTH REMEMBERING

5 ideas

Decide the reaction, action and one-line takeaway before writing

Shaan learned from Chris Quigley to work backward from an emotion, then pick the action the reader should take and the one sentence they should remember. Sam similarly writes a headline and subheadline instead of an outline.

Bad writing usually signals unclear thinking

Shaan says people who say they're bad writers often haven't clarified their idea, and writing also generates new ideas. Sam adds that long-form writing can't hide bad thinking the way a PowerPoint can, which is why Bezos banned PowerPoint at Amazon.

Separate drafting from editing with an incubation gap

Both hosts bang out a fast, bad draft, step away for anywhere from 90 minutes to days, then edit with fresh eyes. Shaan says he used to over-polish drafts and edit immediately, which left him fatigued and doubtful.

Warm up with copywork and keep a swipe file

Copying writing you love by hand for 10 to 15 minutes primes your style and rhythm, like warming up before a workout. A swipe file of great phrases, headlines, openers and closers gives you material when you're stuck.

Open with the punch and create a curiosity gap

Shaan suggests covering all but the first two sentences and asking whether the reader would need to read the next one. The hosts say the lead must be paid off quickly, so a juicy headline isn't clickbait if it delivers.

WORDS WORTH SAVING

5 quotes

Because people remember sentences, not books, and so you have to think about that.

— Shaan Puri

the drafting step is actually where you're supposed to look stupid.

— Sam Parr

You know where, where you can hide bad thinking? In a PowerPoint.

— Sam Parr

If you would never talk about it, don't write about it.

— Shaan Puri

it ain't bait if I actually deliver on the promise.

— Sam Parr

Writing as scalable persuasionWriting as a tool for clear thinkingBeginning with the end in mindCopywork, drafting, incubating and editingHooks, leads and the curiosity gapWriting simply and like you talkStorytelling: intention, obstacle and stakes

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